Beautiful...love all the summertime treasures wrapped up in your verses! Love the imagery.....very thought provoking. 5/5 Debbie

Coney Island...Ah, yes. Such a nice place to be. I never knew you lived around! This is so cooool!!! Hehe, I live here too. Amazing poem my friend. =)

Excellent job....your use of metaphors is great. The imagery wonderful. I really enjoyed this piece.
Take Care Cindy