I thought it might have had something to do with the war in Iraq but i like it. Its really good.
~Sid~

Ver good poem, i like the flow, really nice, and the ending was satisfyin, good job.

Yay mo that was awesome1

OH BABE!!!!!!
That was SO LOVELY AND WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You have a heart of gold!
=]
Geo
xoxoxox

It was good but it had nothing to do with independence day itself.

your servant:
david