hey, this is realli gud, keep up the gr8 work! i luv readin ur poems!

its pretty good, i like the topic, cuz i can relate..... its good, again I think if you elaborate you can make it better, but if you couldn't focus very well then its all good.... Personally I think that if you can do this good and you're not focusing as well then I can't wait until the day that you can totally focus... those'll be some awesome poems! I love your poetry it's awesome.... keep it up!