Very good, it was really deep, but the flow was off on numbers of occasions, good try though.

Nice poem, well written.

Great job on this poem, you did well on flow , deep but good ,again caps on start if sentence
will look a lot better on you,all in all 5/5 keep up the good work,, your friend Tracy

This poem is very good. it has a great meaning and is very well written :)

Loved the poem keep on writting
thanx for the comment