Lovely really :D
Absolute adoration for this one
5/5

Wonderful poem, short but sweet, and it gets to the point so u now exactly whats going on, i think it was very beautiful and i love this type of poetry i might write some like this myself

Great write.

Short, but to the point, and good use of words. thanks for entering my contest!!

5/5
Allanah

Hmm, I thought it was a good poem, the only thing I didn't really like, is that the words had to flow. I think for this style of poem, a single word with a strong meaning as the first syllable would be effective. Then again, I'm not very good with formed poetry. Good stuff though, the line in itself is very well written. Good luck with the contest.

I liked it and it was short so I liked that too lol. So I just loved this poem nice work!

Tetractys is one of my favorite styles of poetry. Word choice is always a major factor in short poems, and you did very well in this, suiting the poem well. I can relate to it, as well as a lot of other people that could when trying to move on from heartbreak. Very well done. =] 5/5

Tammie

Tetractys are often very hard to write but your're so good!!!
the poem was short but meaningful.
love it!!! kat-x-

I haven't seen this style before, but I think you did a great job with it.
Though shourt it really stands out to the reader, and I loved the ending, I thought it was a great way to wrap up.

I have yet to try this style and you've made it look so effortless and simple but i know staying to a fixed syllable count is hard =)
Great job
5/5
*Gem*

I always like to read this poems.
The creative techniques. The
same 'ol abcb, or abab ect...
it gets tiering. Wonderful!
God Bless 5/5
<3Tayy
^_^ily

I don't tend to like poems formatted like this.. However, it was strangely attractive as a piece of writing, and the words were formed perfectly. A great write.

Sole. x

Wow...great job, I have never seen this type of poem before but i think it is very interesting. Great job -unattractive1