Comments : Still, Let It Be

  • 13 years ago

    by Firooz

    Good work here is, 5/5 for your this post, come and see mine , vote+comment :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Gem

    Ooo, one of my faves by you!
    The rhythm was so excellent. It sounded like it could almost be sung.
    The imagery was amazing, i felt like i was stood right there as the words were recited..
    I love it!
    5/5
    *Gem*

    (And yeah, written to kill my writers block.. and it worked for a while, got a couple of new ones now =)

  • 13 years ago

    by sibyllene

    I liked this one as well : ) It put me in mind of the poetry of the Romantics, if you're familiar, with the exclamations and softness.

    There was a very nice, subtle rhyme moving thoughout the whole thing, and I think it worked very well. The only rhyming phrase I didn't particularly like was "it deepens some feet." I know you were looking for a match for "beat," but... "some feet" is kind of bland. But, hey, it's not as though it made the poem bad, I just think you have the talent to do something more with it.

    Again, I'll restate that I loved the rhythm and the movement of the words - I can tell you chose them well. I also liked the occasional questioning nature of the poem. Good work, again!

  • 13 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Beautiful and romantic Debbie...well done....love the rhyme scheme and slightly plaintive tone...well done once again.

  • 13 years ago

    by Alesia

    Amazing poem! I really enjoyed your choice in words, they moved the poem very nicely. I too, enjoyed the connection you used with nature. Nicely penned. =) 5/5

    Alesia

  • 13 years ago

    by robin milford

    Debb this is great poem beautiful thanks for the comment on"The one I once loved"

  • 13 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wow.. this is really great.. i love the metaphors and the flow is really nice as well.. a different style than your other poems and it shows me that you can write wonderfully in all different types of poetry.. this is by far my favorite of them all... the passion i feel is really strong in this poem.. keep it up :D

  • 13 years ago

    by amber

    I love this poem! I like your choice in words.. they really paint a picture for me. The metaphors are beautiful... awesome job! I'm so impressed!

  • 12 years ago

    by malina

    Flawless =)

  • 12 years ago

    by David

    I loved the title. it was inviting and amazingly open. the poem itself was great, some parts need to be worked on but you will fix them in the future. your talent is evident and your skill is present. well done and don't stop. keep writing from your heart.

    5/5 David

  • 12 years ago

    by nikki

    I loved it, your wording was perfect. i gave you 5/5. it was awesome, i did add you to my fave's so i hope you dont mind. but the poem was excelent, the rythem was great the flow was great. there is not one thing i can say in a bad way about the poem. well great job.

  • 12 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    As always i love your poems as you really know how to touch your readers heart...
    in this one, once again you did a great job with the metopher and the word choice, that made this poem one of the greatest poem,
    i really enjoy reading all of your poems and it is because you are truly a great poet that is why your poems are so great .
    dear, im really one of your biggest fan who love all of your words. keep it up like always.
    a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

  • 12 years ago

    by rebecca hefferna

    Wow!!! your flow with words is superb! your so young to, very talented, keep the very good work up. bek

  • 12 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Yep, another beautiful poem lol. All I can say is you have have a great talent for poetry. 5/5

    marcella

  • 12 years ago

    by Spirit

    This poem has a deep meaning great work
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Mr M

    As I closed my eyes to sleep
    to that steady beating sound
    I wondered if the sun was shining
    on some distant other ground

    my favorite part of this...

  • 12 years ago

    by Hebe

    Great poem.
    Deep and emotional.
    Great flow, rhyming and word choice.
    Loved reading it.
    Take care

  • 12 years ago

    by Mandz and Aly

    Wow i like this its really awesome...Manda

  • 12 years ago

    by njabulo b

    I feel like I have to repeat this poem many times, its so nice i like the rhyming (especially the 1st stanza) marvelous poem just as usually.

  • 12 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    I like it very much :)
    5/5