Comments : The One And Only

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*SugarCube*~

    "She'll never leave
    Through the good & the bad
    She'll always be"

    I like those lines. This poem is sweet.
    It could be better if it was a little longer though. well done. 5/5

    ~Chelsea

  • 17 years ago

    by Nikki

    Liked it

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    OH YEAH SAY IT NICE AND Proud this poem rules i love it 5/5 for sure.

  • 17 years ago

    by shawn

    I liked it alot, but i do agree that this poem would be to pair with you others if it was a bit longer. But i still think it deserves a 5/5, well done!

  • 17 years ago

    by amoxi

    This poem was good moms are the greatest people ever very nice job

  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    Aww thats such a sweet poem! i hope she got to read it. well done hun.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wow the ending of this really caught me by suprise for some reason. I liked it, very sweet, its easy to tell that you and your mother have a very close and tight bond. The only thing that I have to say is if you made this poem a bit longer and went into more descriptions of why she is that way it would be a bit better. But I still really liked it.