You express so many inner thoughts here, it's beautiful! 5/5

This is good

This is a good poem also!! keep it up!!
-Breann
5/5

I loved the unexpected twist at the end of the poem. Well written.

Very simple, but cute.

[5/5}

[PygmyPuff]

Yup, pure simple and it came out great.. I love it, I just love knowing wat is next.. U got da words super great!