That was beautiful, very emotional and touched the heart. Keep up the good work, =)
-Ally

This was really good
The moon was full the night we kissed,
beneath our dark abyss.
Tight in you arms you held me close,
holding me until the sun rose.

Was my favorite part.
Good flow, well pinned nicely written 5/5

Erm.. first of all i loved the way you used bees in it its had connotations of summer and fun etc.. some of it was hard to read because of the layout other than that it was really good well done

xxx alex xxx

This poem is so sweet and just beautiful... I am actually getting married in March so this poem really stood out to me... and I love it! Great job writing it... it's beautiful! 5/5!

I don't like ending but whole piece is great. Fourth stanza is my favorite one. You described emotions excellently. 5/5

Aww cuteness this poem was so sweet and so very well written i loved it you are one of my favourite poets and im gonna put u in my favourites

i give it a very well earnt 5/5

Elaine, wow girlie.. I really really liked this poem! I read your work and wow.. you just do so well with rhyming, I wish I had that talent of yours! You did very well with this poem, and the last sentence wraps it all up perfectly. The paragraph I enjoyed reading the most was,

"At night no longer would I see,
a black sheet closing in on me.
But a night sky alight with diamonds, the lingering glow of love."

I think I love it so much because of how you described the stars as diamonds in the sky.

Great job Elaine! 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Loveless Nights~ aka ~Kayla~

This poem was amazing, I have read a few of yours now. They definitely really stand out. Even the ones that you didn't rhyme. You have amazing talent great job!