Wow.. simply amazing.. so deep and meaningful.. your words hold so much power.. congrats once again on a wonderful piece
5/5
.x

Very interesting piece, truly unique. I enjoyed in every line. Choice of word is superb.
My favorite stanza is:
-Upon those deep blue orbs,
I could never see
the evil guise of
mocking age and morbid sin;
nor the wicked reflection
revealing
what men have done to their lives
so broken.-
^greatly written lines.
The ending is good, too.
5/5 from me

I remember reading this one before and its still a great poem. I love your choice of words here. so descripitve. 5/5

marcella

I'm fascinated by you,
my darling doll...
[[Mouth drops open. I hate you. I hate you. I hate you. I hate you.]]

Anyways.
This was wonderful.
I loved the metaphor's in it, though, I felt as if (by that last line) it was God speaking to Human's saying, "Hey, you're not that beautiful and all your stupidity really fascinates me," and I fcuking love that.
Gorgeous job, again.

And this comes to the end of my comments, much to my regret. Man, I thought I was a decent poet, but god your poetry kicks mine's as*.
Anyways. I'm serious about that and because of that, you're going on my favorites. I have a few on my favorites and my favorites I read everytime they get a new poem, most of the time. So. =]]

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

U aN amazinG greaT writeR...

Great poem.
Enjoyed reading it.

Great poem.
Enjoyed reading it.

Just a beautiful poem you had written....

Nazeer with you...

Interesting way of piecing emotion together... I truly admire you for going for something a little more obscure, and pulling it off nicely. The placement of your words was intelligent but not confusing; the end was strong and tied together the entire piece; your vocab was varied but not overly dramatic. You give the audience a description, but allow enough blank spots to be filled in by their own creative imaginations.

5/5, definately

[tragic]

A great poem!
I love the flow and your word choice!..
It was a pleasure to read.
Take care!