Just spare a thought. a t on the end. also first line your don't is like this, don,t. make it don't.

but it was very interesting to know a very different side of you.

5/5 david

If it makes you feel any better I've felt like this before! 5/5

Honey, if at least one person takes comfort from knowing that they share a trait with someone else and it makes them fell better, you've done a great thing in posting it.
I'm glad you did.
Feeling like that is more common than you think but people are to scared or ashamed to show it. You've shown that you're that much braver by posting this piece
Kudos my friend =)
5/5
*Gem*

"Just spare a though" place a 't' on there hun.
&& i also bloody love you for posting this because this has matched exactly how i feel about losing someone just recently so reading this helped me understand it all =]
Jen x

Sometimes the best poetry comes when we pour out our hearts. This is a very touching piece.

My flaws are great I know that too,
But if you stay i wont hurt you,
I'll change i promise its not a lie,
I am so scared, you'll leave, I'll die.

Great job!
Take Care Cindy

Very good poem! I am glad you posted it because their are so many people that feel this way, myself included at times. And reading poems like this helps us feel better knowing were not alone. Great job on this one! I just wish I could get into your love section as well lol. Well I give this 5/5 again a wonderful poem.

Hey..it's a beautiful poem...though there are a few punctuation probs...the poem as a whole is well wriiten...beautiful!..kp writing!
Tk care!
xxPoojaxx

There are some people in the world who really feel this way even me there are times before i have feel and suffer about this situation. i think its very great flow and nice writen. i can honestly understand. and most important u write it w/all of ur hearts so this is very appreciated work for me. and everyone has their own opinion so for me i give it 5/5