Ahhhh, this poem speaks to me, hellyeah. life can be real shit to you at times, because some people are real selfish or heartless and don't care about anyones feelings but their own. I think I really like this poem, coz i can relate too it, and the flow of it was really well good, and the rhymingg fit in well, and not forced.
kaitlynx.

I know how you feel with this poem, how rich kids get everything handed to them and don't have to earn/work for a thing. Although they have an easy path down the road of life, we'll be better people in the end with respect and appreciation for the things we had to earn. Excellent write 5/5

This poem is not my cup of tea, but its not always the answer to have a vendetta against some one. people who are rich, and have many tangible things are usualy lacking in sensible things, and emotions.

tom

Wow. this is a strong and emotional poem. it sends out a strong and deep and true meaningful message. great job. 5/5 for me. and thank you for the comments.

The last line was perfect I loved it. In the last paragraph I liked the repetition of "maybe." The flow was pretty good and it was an interesting rhyme scheme you chose to use in this piece. In some places the syllable count was a little un-even.

"Does it make you feel good to stomp on everyone's feelings
and make everyone feel like dirt?
^^ I didn't like the repetition of the word "everyone" Try making the second everyone "them."

A very nice write....exactly the words to say to those certain people that we ALLL know...5/5

Very interesting I really liked the last line about how maybe you will change but I doubt it you will always be still acting like you do. That one spoke to me because people always tell you that when you get older these people will change but thats isnt always true. Very fitting of the title. Nice work.

Yea i know this kinda people.they are so irritating and it was a really excellent description that you made...the flow keeps ypu going
Good job
Laura

Well written, perfect show of clear emtions, really deep, clear message and so true, I know many people like that too, hopefully one day the person you are talking about, will see the errors of their ways. I really liked this the wording was perfect, keep up the good work.
5/5

Very truely written. its truth. i loved you this poem i must will give you 5/5.