Aw great poem I can definitely relate .. kinda.. one thing though should "Named" be "Names" ? I dunno just wanted to let you know. other then that it was really good it was short but it still had that powerful feel of emotion and hurt. awsome job. <3

Very very strong emotion in this it is really good, 5/5 i love poems where you can feel the peoples emotions, its how all poems should be.. you shouldnt have to force anything out = ] so keep it up

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But that day my life cam crashing down
Came .

The emotion was strong, but I wish you would choose a number of lines for each stanza . or follow a pattern or something . Most poems I`ve read in this style, the flow begins to rock . I do though, think you did a good job . You could just feel the emotion .

Editing would make it even better `tho I`m sure (:
..__MiNDYY

Again another great poem, i was a little more confused about this poem for you mention a pad with names on it like a blackbook list for people you want to hurt but then you mention that you were once friends, so i got a little confused but otherwise a great poem

Hummm.. This poem confused me a little.. About the pad with names on it...Humm..There were some typos but that's not that big of deal it just makes it a little more confusing and messes with the flow..
I give it a 4/5

It's a very nice poem, the flow seems very good, though it get's a little bit confusing for me in the 2nd stanza, but it might be my english knowledge...

It's also very sad, but i can relate to it...
keep on writing...

*isabel*

I agree with Tyanna on this. It was a good message you wanted to be read, but it was slightly off with a few typos, and such. It isn't easy writing friendhip poems, so it is pretty good. Keep up the good work, you'll only get better. Thanks for the comment on mine. =)
-Ally

I liked it. The flow was good and the emotion was show.
Sadly some friendships don't last.
But it can be for the better.
Keep it up 5/5

|Sarah|