I think we all know what it feels like to be stuck in a nightmare, it seems no matter what we do things just won't get better. We just have to stay strong and better days will follow. excellent job with this one 5/5
...Not exactly the best. Your choice of words could've been better. I liked the repetition of the last line in the stanzas though.
"you ruined my life when you ruined our love"
THis line stands out for some reason. The emotional appeal is great but overall not astounding.
The poem was kind of average.
There was nothing that stuck out to me.
I like your story, though.
It would suck getting stuck in a bad dream.
Your format is okay.
Your spelling is perfect.
But still, nothing stuck out.
Nothing called out to me.
I'll give you a 4 :]