Comments : You that caused the fall...(for my mom)

  • 12 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Very lovely write hun :) its sad though, im sorry that this is happening or did happen to you. 5/5 love

  • 12 years ago

    by CHOKE

    I only have yahoo.
    lizbrat0145@yahoo.com

  • 12 years ago

    by SpEcIaLmE

    Wow luv this poem, its emotional and really gets the point across
    i luv the last stanza the most, it stands out 2 me prob cuz thats what i think all the time but yeah
    "one day ill get mad.
    and ill end it all.
    maybe then ull realize,
    its you that caused the fall. "
    great job, keep up the good work
    p.s im adding this poem 2 my favs cuz i just luv it
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by LifeThroughMyEyes

    Wow...thanks for addin it....that makes me feel really good! this is one of my scariest poems and yet one of my favorites.... my mom read it a while back and started bawling... hrm...but thanks again!

  • 11 years ago

    by alim

    I really liked this poem.

    keep writing.

    i read in your about me you recently stopped cutting.

    i'm happy for you!