I liked this poem i think it portrayed so much throughout it. It was a superb poem on life lept me interested throughout it all. Good job with this ~mel

Very good poem...kept my attention throughout.. Very well written,,5/5

Wow that was amaazing... beautiful too read just gorgeous... it flowed so welll... i would think it would be hard to write such a beautifully penned poem that flows and is enjoyable about with that wording, but that waaass if i could give you a 10 i would... but i guess i'll have too settle with a 5
gabriella

Very well written, it flowed nicely. 5/5

Good job, i love it! you kept my attention thru the whole poem, which is great. look forward to reading more of your work 5/5