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by candace Apr 17, 2007 category : Internet slang / other
Cinderella, why do you wish to be like anyone else? Your fine by yourself. People notice you because your different Cinderella, why do you wish to be pretty? What you have is called inner beauty Iâ??m not giving you my pity Cinderella, Why donâ??t you stand up to those snobs? They are garbage compared to you The people who rob End up blue Cinderella, Why donâ??t you take whatâ??s yours? And not just dust either Stop doing those chores Cinderella, Why donâ??t you go out? Not as a maid but who you really are Go a different route You will shine like a star Cinderella, why donâ??t you let the beauty out? The prince will like you for you Go out and about Forget the glass shoe Cinderella, why donâ??t you forget its midnight? Show the prince who you really are You wont win without a fight Iâ??m telling you shine like star Be yourself not someone else
by Tara
The poem had a good meaning, but the flow was a bit rocky though. maybe try not to change the lines in each stanza from like 3 to 4 or something, otherwize good job---tara
by peytonn
Very cutee. good job =]
