God i know how u feel, it is not just u but that is the truth of love,
oh god, how many times i promised myself to forget her and then i had to listen to my missed up heart.....
great poem with deeply true message...
keep up the great work and welcome to the best place P&Q

Good poem, good vocab. It was a good flow except when I read the 7nth line. It kinda went off a little, it just didnt go with the rest of the poem. Maybe change it? I dont know. But overall it was a good poem!

I agree, I thought it had excellent vocabulary, great writing, =) Welcome and keep up the good work. You'll only improve. =)
-Ally

You did a good job. Nice word choice. Keep up the good work. If ou keep writting, I;ll keep reading, because I can really relate. 4/5

This is a really good start, i think you should try to finish the poem though, instead of just leaving it kinda hanging like that. but it's really powerful, you choose good words and the flow is really good too... so
4/5
gabriella

Hey thanks for the comment. i rated this poem 3/5 because it didnt really flow well. but other than that good job.

Isnt that hard when someone break a promise, specially when it is from someone you adore........... I feel it.
another great job by you and another 5/5 from me.

Wow not only was this poem amazingly powerful, it was so relateable!! i totally felt what you were sayin and i could feel your emotions and pain. structure or line spacings could be improved but that kinda stuff comes with time, but thanks i really like knowing im not the only person who feels like this!! 5/5

I like this poem, although I really don't like the guy...which is strange because I never met him lol but still don't like em

I like the way you have written this, you can really feel the emotion, and the sadness here. well done.

-tear-

yeah, very sad poem, but great work! You wrote it in a way that even people who haven't gone through that love stuff can feel the emotion.

5/5

Very sad, it makes you wonder what guys will say just to mess with your head