To me personally...the story line was a bit cliche but i think it was a good poem anyways

The emotions flowed beautifully in this poem. Although i found the story to be a little bit off and maybe cliche i think u pulled this over really well. Well done on a beautifully penned poem. Definitly a 5/5 in my eyes.
~mel

Panting the sweetest little kiss on her lips.
Planting .

She asks him if that's hot it is,
Do you mean 'how' ?

The story was cliche ... Like, the feelings are there . The emotion, but there`s just something that`s missing . It ended too short, but I think with a little editing and thinking, it could be real good .
..__MiNDYY

I really liked the first half of the poem but the second half started to lose my attention..I think maybe the transition just came to quickly, it flowed up untill that point.
The emotions were there though.. I give this a 4/5 Tyanna

It was a great poem. But in my opinion, I think you said too much He said, She said, maybe change it a little, re-word it? Like the rest said, theres something missing, just dont know what. I'd give you a 4/5.

This was really good.. somestimes the most passion and emotion are in the last kisses because they know that they are going to be the last one. I really liked the different perspectives and how they interacted with the rest of the poem. nice work

I liked this poem. It was very deep. The word choice was excellent, for the most part. some part seemed cliche, but The stroy was intresting, again you did a wonderful job.

This seemed more like a story than a poem, but it was still beautifully expressed.
I noticed some words were repeated a lot which threw me off at times, but apart from that you did a good job.

I wouldnt want someone to kiss me if we were about to break up but great poem 5/5