He took me to paridise

by tasha   Apr 18, 2007


It was like i was trapped in a forest. a lost mind not knowing where to go or what to do. like i couldnt find my way out of the confusion and lonelyness. but then he came and he said "say nothing and i shall lead thou to freedom for eternity" so i trusted and followed him. he took me to a hidden path that nobody but him knew about. it was a pathway to happiness and freedom. "just take thine hand and i shall lead thou down this path" he said. i pressed his hand against mine and then we began to travel. there were some bumps on the way to the end but we never gave up and kept going till we reached what we was both looking for. finally it was right there in front of our faces. it was the door to paradise. he then turned his head still holding my hand and looked at me eye to eye and said "now this is the biggest decision you shall have to make, does thou want to continue following thine young stranger and open this door to paradise and live with thee for the rest of thou life or remain as thine was before thou met thee?" i looked at the big, white door and looked back down the dark and lonely path and then looked at the young man and said "thou hast saveth thee lost soul and gave thee a reason to live so thine picks living in paradise with thee forever" the young man then smiled so big and opened the door to paradise and led me into what was so perfect. almost as perfect as heaven. until this day i continue living in paradise and plan to for eternity

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