Hmm, it's different. It's good though. Using words like skimmed, crisp, cynical, made it seem more poetry like. Even though it was only about a newspaper. I enjoyed it very much so. Good job, it flowed okay. Not the best, but was good. Keep writing. =) 5/5
-Ally

Mmm. you poems are truly amazing. they are so unique.

i decided to read some of your poems for inspiration. i have to write a poem that is a little awkward and out there. so i thought maybe id find some crazy silver jay poem that will turn on a few more switches.

i liked this, it was so normal, but unique. =] 55