This is really good and you put alot of emotional work into this and can you plz rate and comment on my new poem my first and only love. thanks

Beautiful write...filled with emotions...though short...it was a lovely work!...n i can realate too.kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

I like this a lot...very well written, the words flowed very well, and all around it was cute, short and sweet. 5/5 from me!

This poem was short, but it worked for it. I love the last stanza because it flowed really well and it held a lot of emotion.

Alyson

I feel for you.
good poem, it doesn't really have a flow. but i like it none the less

This was simple, i liked it. and it flowed well, it was short and didnt rhyme but that made it better actually, it was a good read.
well done
xxxxxx