Like bread and butter it comes together :P
and together it comes very nicely, remember to doubt yourself is a first step in a path to lose yourself :) so dont doubt :) its a very intelligent poem it takes a lot to come up with something like this or other poetry you're gifted my dear remember that ;) 99/5

^ Lmao. I'd give you 100/5 though. =P

'Twas soo random, yet it was written very nicely! lol I bet this was written to kill your writers block, ne? Kudos
Love,
Debbie

Gem
This was really cute and just flowed along while reading...lol

Great :)
Take Care Cindy

Awwwh it wasn't stupid, I thought it was really cute!
It made me smile =)

Like sand through an hourglass, those are the days of our lives. That's what came to mind.
This was cute and made me smile.

And also like funny and serious.

Lol i loved it gem!!! super cute! i really loved the last stanza too! great job!

----tara

I loved it! It was super cute and fun to read! Kept me interested! Great Job!

It's not stupid, it is simple but cute!

That ones fun to read, like you have to read it fast too. Good one.

A nice poem, i liked the rhyme, seems a little childish but it came out well, good job.

Aw, that was cute. lol. 5/5

Cute. [=

Sweet little rhyme....I like it...

Jeje- its a cute poem

I love it!! the poem is really nice. :D