Comments : 5 Months

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    OMG your poem made me so depressed so beautiful I just wanted to cry, really I loved it 5/5 oh i hope you read one of mine.

  • 16 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    Sad , btu it was so emotive aswell...gr8 poem write
    keep up the good work:D
    bree

  • 16 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    This is well written but so sad

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    Sad but great poem.... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenna Rose Kat

    Wow... That brought a tear to my eye. I'm really sorry for your loss.
    Amazing poem :)

  • 16 years ago

    by 0BrokenBella0

    This is amazing. And sad. Nice to see so much emotion, although I do wish it could have been about something else. But we don't alway choose what happens in our lives. Keep writing. Looking forward to reading more from you.

    <3 bella