Alot of emotion put into this. It's a wonderful poem. You did an amazing job on it.!!!!!!!!!!!
well done. 5/5

~Chelsea

Nice work, if flowed very well, the words were great, and used perfectly. Great message, all in a great poem. Keep up the goodwork. =) 5/5
-Ally

AWww. Really cute. ( I think )
The poem didn't flow very smooth but I still enjoyed reading it. Keep up the great work!
God Bless 5/5
<3Tayyy

We've been through a lot
So much has broken us down.
We've been pushed passed our limits
Now on a break and left with a frown.

Definitely my favourite stanza . It says a lot to me & I can relate to that in a way .

When you are use to all of the doubt.
Did you mean "used" to all of the doubt ? I think that line was slightly too long . Maybe take out the of ? But it`s just a thought . I liked the beginning with that stanza, and ending with the same stanza . Most of the time it doesn`t work, but you worked it in you`r poem . Awesome job (: i liked it a lot .
Reminds me of how I used to feel ...
..__MiNDYY

Sometimes dreams don't come true; I love your poem 5/5 I feel you wrote and mean it from the bottom of your heart Steve

Awsome dear wow just 5/5. The questions are beautifully worded. great!

Lovely poem the story comes in a very unique way I like the questions that you put in this poem they really get the reader hooked.