Comments : I Need You

  • 17 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Awww i love this poem/song! i think you are a really great write! and i know that the person who it is for is lucky! keep writting, oh, and just a little help.. the first stanza you wrote 'friend ship' babe,, but its all one word.. other than that a really great heart felt peice! love ya xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Beautiful and magical! It honestly comes to life with the imagery in it! 5/5