Comments : Lullaby

  • 16 years ago

    by GothChick

    How sweet! Great lullaby/poem! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    Aww.. thats so adorable!.. i love this poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    This poem/lullaby is good. Did it work, putting the baby to sleep? 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by The Mr Simon

    Maybe it would have if i could sing *cough* haha no actually what happened was that by the time i finished writing it, I had to leave on a flight so the poor thing never got to hear it.

  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    Lol thats the kind of thing that always happens to me - like i'll come up with a great april fools day trick the day after, or a retort about and hour later. the lullaby's really sweet.

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    It's a delightful read, indeed. Perhaps it could be better if I heard it sung by you? :)

    all the best and take care