I really liked this poem, because the words you used made your vocab seem really strong. Even though it didnt ryhme i found the flow to be flawless. One thing that i didnt like was just some lines seemed longer then others and the format of the poem was a little off aswel but that could be your own personal style so i cant vote less just because of that. I found this poem to be a great read. 5/5 ~mel