Wow... thats all i can really say. If I wasnt so tired right now i'd be crying. It's nice of you to write about it.

Wonderful job. That was a very sad thing that happened. I feel so sorry for their families. Again, Great job! Keep it up!

Wow..very touching.. I mean to be honest I haven't thought much about that...Really made me think though.. You did a wonderful job with this poem. The rhyme scheme, flow...everything was flawless...Great job.
Tyanna 5/5

This was an okay poem.
There's something missing...
I just can't put my finger on it.
The flow was okay.
Consistency was fantastic.
All in all I give it a four :]

Really nicely done..
it was a horrible thing that happened, and you put it together very well.

Th was penned well..n the reason that it is a tribute to those who lost their lives due to ths tragic event makes the whole poem worth reading..Excellent work...5/5=)
xxPoojaxx

My eyes are tearing up. It is a very sad thing. How could someone do something like that? I love how you took something important that impacted America and put into a work of your own. great job
Bree

I liked it. That was a hard day for many. 5/5

I loved it.
I have a poem about this too.
Such a sad and useless day, eh.
You did a great job writing this hun.
It was beautiful, and warming. :]

Such a touching poem on such a tragic loss. really moving, it held deep, strong emtion, the wording was great, and the flow was alright, it was off in a couple of places, but other thatn that this poem was well written, and wonderfully penned. 5/5

Yeh i understand the pain behind this poem it was sad. takecare

It was a good poem. But I have a suggestion in the third stanza you repeated 'No one' three times in just one stanza so I'll suggest changing one of them to "nobody" but it's just a suggestion :) anyway flow was okay for me choice of words is good! well done. 5/5!