This is Love

by Curry   Apr 21, 2007


This is it,
This is love,
This is how i want to feel.
This is it,
This is love,
The thing that makes me feel so real.
I know its love,
The one thing I've been dreaming of,
A wonderful blessing from above.
The way we kiss,
It's permanent bliss.
The way he holds me tight,
It feels so right.
The way he says he loves me,
It all tells me this is love,
It has to be.
I'm so happy to be his,
His girl,his life,
His world.
If this isn't love,
Then I don't know what love is.
This is it,
The thing I've been dreaming of,
A blessing from above,
This is love.

Written by:Curry on 4.6.07

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  • 16 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Aww this is the cutest poem ever.. definity my favorite.. i especially love the first couple of lines.. they were excellent.. the short choppy lines were sweet and elemetnal.. but it words because its like a first love.. fantastic poem..

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Ohhh this was so pretty!
    I really liked the repetition you used in this, I thought it had impact, and all the way through reading the poem, I was smiling.
    The flow was good throughout and the ending was such a perfect way to wrap up.

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    I liked it. This was a tad bit overused, I liked out it was repeated a lot, but I think it was repeated a bit too much. Other than that you did a great job with this poem. The emotions were pretty good, along with the flow.
    keep it up.
    <3 Teria.

  • 17 years ago

    by Austin

    This poem is filled with so much emotion...unlike the other one this is full of joy and happiness...wonderful to read...5/5

  • There was a lot of emotion in this poem.
    However I think you could of done more with it.
    4/5

    [Sarah]