Wow this is really good. great job on it! you should try to make it longer tho. keep writing! 5/5

~Kristina

Loved it
powerful and really deep
5/5

This is a good poem.... keep it up... lve skye x x x

I love this poem!
it like describes my life rite now!
the end made me almost cry!
good job!
very powerful!

Great to see another which is from the UAE..

This is a powerful piece however ( just my opinion) it could've been powerful if there were punctuations at tge right place...Just the puctuation but nevertheless it dint change a thing still a great write..

Keep writing..