Comments : Desire

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Well, you know i wasnt sure about this, the thing with something like this is it can be good, but then it could be quite crap, but dont fear, because i loved it!!
    I thought the emotion was awesome, and it was so beautiful, it brought tears to my eyes, you're so talented and i'm adding you to my favourites.
    xxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Superman

    I am quite astonished. Excellent write!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    Another good one, you've impressed me. The last line tied it all up, it was perfect.

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Loved it! The emotions were very easy for me to relate too busy I loved someone and wanted them soo much it was killing me inside that I didnt know how they felt. Well done, it truly made me emotional. *5/5* and you are being favorited!

  • I totally loved this poem you have a lot of talent on writitng poems. It was a pleasure reading your poems. Great work. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    Wow i can relate to this poem 100% lol. it was very well written!!! it also had a niice flow to it that made it better!

    <3 i love you silly

  • 16 years ago

    by TracyM

    Sweet poem, was a pleasure to read, good word choice, and it flowed beautifull. Really well written.

  • 15 years ago

    by brittany

    I LOVE THIS POEM U ARE REALLY
    GOOD IM GOIN THREW THIS RIGHT NOW
    AND U TOOK THE WORDS RIGHT OUT OF MY MOUTH KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK

    ON OF MY FAV POEMS

  • 13 years ago

    by Stephen

    Kaila this is a great poem, filled with emotion! I am in the same situation you write about in this poem at the moment, it is really tough waiting on someone you know you can be extremely happy with.