Chilling right down to the bone. pain, vengeance, idiotic love, a whole lot of wrong put into a great poem.

your servant:
david

Wow this is really good. i really like it a lot. it flowed so well. you did such an amazing job on writing it. wonderful job with it. 5/5

~Kristina

I loved the repetition.
Really captured me.
I think you over used "!" a bit much though.

But I really enjoyed this poem.
I loved the vocab used and how it flowed.
It was really different.

Well done :]]

Hey,
i love your poem,
it flows nicely and the rhyming is great.
i absolutely love the second stanza =) 5/5
and i really enjoyed reading it.
kisses stephanie

:) I enjoyed the wording on this poem it had excellent flow to it. 5/5

We all feel lonely at times, and it's good that you can write how your feel, and you did a great job expressing your feelings. Although this poem did seem cliche, there were some unique lines in there at made the poem different. I really enjoyed this poem, and I am looking forward to reading some more of your poetry. I also enjoyed the rhyme scheme, I thought it was quite clever!.. Good job on this one :)