Libby

by Josh Cox   Apr 21, 2007


Have you ever been in love
Have you ever got that feeling
Well I am right now
As you will find out as you keep reading

Her name is Elizabeth Jean Sides
I have known her for forever
My feelings for her have grown
But me love her a few years ago, I would have thought never

But now shes all I ever think of
Morning noon and night
Im starting to think It's love
Because when I'm with her everything just feels right

*I dont know what to do
But my feelings for her are growing
It would help alot if I knew she loved me to
I even think of her in class so my grades are rapidly lowering

I think we would make the perfect couple
But I cant get up the confidence to ask her out
People have said she likes me to
But I still have my doubts

She has said to me I LOVE YOU
But she says it to everyone
Its hard to know if she really means it
Or if I'm just another "one"

*Well this poem ends with me still in love,
And wondering about her
But not to worry I will tell you what happens with us
Trust me I will write more

sorry the stars indicate where i have to make some changes but i dont have the time right now

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  • 17 years ago

    by Marie

    Ok first that doesnt flow with the rest :
    I dont know what to do
    But my feelings for her are growing
    It would help alot if I knew she loved me to
    I even think of her in class so my grades are rapidly lowering

    I would reccomenD:
    I dont know what to do
    but my feelings for her are growing
    it would help if she loved me too
    and in my grades it's showing

    Ok next on that doesnt flow:

    Well this poem ends with me still in love,
    And wondering about her
    But not to worry I will tell you what happens with us
    Trust me I will write more

    not sure exactly how to fix this one... umm. maybe...
    The end of the poem, I'm still in love
    still wondering of her
    But no worries I'll tell what happens with us
    Of that you can be sure

    some reccomendations... dont have to follow them.. actually it's prolly btter if u didnt.. just kinda there to show yo some options.. meld it back into your style but make it flow a little and the poem would be perfect cuz the rest of it works really well.

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