Once Upon A Time

by Mousie   Apr 21, 2007


Once upon a time
In a world so dark,
A Prince saw a Princess
And made his mark.

His eyes of compassion
And his heart of love,
His touch so gentle
Like the soul of a dove.

A lost man's soul
Met her lonely heart's glee,
Into the sunset they rode
Ever so happily.

not quite as good, i just felt the need to write something. i had written a story for ross in school yesterday b/c i was bored and i made it like a fairytale but it was like it was us, so i turned part of it into a poem. hope you all like it!!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by hadia

    I love the beggining..how it says the prince met the pincess in a world so dark, thats so cute!!

    great job(:

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    Though it was short, I thought it was a great poem! It was full of love, happiness, and just so much emotion. I could just picture all of this happening inside my mind. Great job! Keep up the good work. 5/5 <3 <3 <3

    ~Kayla~

  • 16 years ago

    by Polaroid

    Not quite as good? man, that was awesome

    5.5
    polaroid

  • 16 years ago

    by Laurenf7

    Love it x

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet Disposition

    I think this is really good. I liked the flow of it good job 5/5

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