Comments : Side By Side, Heart To Heart - Sestina

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Gem
    What a beautiful poem. You did a excellent job on your poetry form. Imagery and word choices were great.
    Take Care Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Poetess Lana

    Aww... i loved it!! you're and awesome poet, no wonder you won my contest!!!

    5/5
    Allanah

  • 16 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    Gem,
    That was outstanding. I'm speechless. You should be proud of this, it is unbelievable and it looks hard to do. I could never do justice to this one.
    Excellente!

  • 16 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Comment #2~
    (*whistles*) Wow! Very ... well ... I'm speechless. You just did so well capturing the mood here. I mean your poems are all so different! And just (*sigh*)...can I say wow again without sounding too repetitive?! Lol! You did amazing, Gem...keep it up girl! 100/5
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    This type of poetry seems difficult to handle, whereas you did a magnificent job writing this piece. I'm enchanted by you, once again, ma'dear! I was rather mesmerized by the third stanza as well as the concluding tercet--simply beautifully written. It's been awhile since a fine love poetry has brought me back to nostalgia. =]
    Keep on writing what you feel and like, and I surely will keep on reading!
    Love,
    Debbie

  • 16 years ago

    by chavii

    Its so beautiful almost magical.A real delight and master piece to read.And the way to followed the strict format amazes me further.Excellent job dear.

    Take care
    chavii.

  • 16 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Wow ive learned something new today :) thank Gem, oh but i could never write something like this, god you're good :))

  • 16 years ago

    by Jen

    Wow you are so good at writing poems :)
    loved your word choice here Gem, and hey ive learnt a new kind of poem as i always do when reading yours lol
    ~*~Jen~*~

  • 16 years ago

    by linderrrxo

    Wow i really like this poem can you comment one of mine thank love always linda
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Brett

    That was cute... ^_^

    I liked the story it told pretty awesomelike :D

    Mad props too cuz it would be really hard to make a poem with such strict...rules? lol u know what i mean =P

    Wonderful..5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by moonlil

    Wow, thats an excellent written poem. I loved the structure and all the beautiful words you used. Really great!

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Excellent job on this most difficult form....beautiful!

  • 16 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    It was good..not a lot of imagery but i love this different style..keep it up.

    melissa

  • 16 years ago

    by Alex

    That's really beautiful Gem. I could never write something so complicated. Are you a pro or something? You're on my favorites. 5.5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Poeta

    Wow, that was amazing! And so complex, yet so simple. Does that make sense? ^.^
    It was just... wow. That was soo pretty! I love your work!

    OXOX, Poeta

  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Wow such a complex and heart poured poem wow no mroe to say lol, you are fantastic :D

    xxx alex xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Miranda

    I think this is the best poem I've read yet,even though I'm new here.
    You are an excellent writter.
    Keep up the good work. :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael Viktor

    It' a very beautiful poem. I like the very symbolic lines that makes you feel the passion right into your bones. I'm have studied medicine and therefore I'm glad too observe different kind of structures in a poem. The matematical structure is fascinating and I like it very much!

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    OMG.. This is really superb! WOW.. You really did a great job on this one! the choice of words was superb! I'm really speechless in this poem :) well done! 5/5!! lol you should be a pro poet! or maybe you are :P anyway I really enjoyed reading this one :)

  • 16 years ago

    by For The Heart I Once Had

    A really beautifully written poem. Keep up the excellent work. 5/5