Oh my gosh! I wish it woul've kept going it was so good! You led this poem down the right track for sure! I'm so adding you to my favorites your poems are always so great!

Wow, you are an amazing writer, and have an awesome talent for expressing your emotions and the way you feel.

This stanza really sticks out to me,
Slowly being pulled in,
The water's getting deep.
I'm losing all the memories,
That I've tried so hard to keep.
Very strong emotion.

Keep up the good work!

xoxo-amber

This was a really good poem and an enjoyable read. It was full of emotion and imagery. Nice job!

Very nice poem.. i really enjoyed reading it.. and it kept me interested the entire time... good job.. keep it up and thanks for the comment =]

I enjoyed the imagery in this poem! I like the structure in this poem! well done! flow was good! keep it up! I really enjoyed reading this one! keep writing! 5/5! as always

Excellent work dear!

Flooded with emotion,
This isn't where I want to be.
Dying in the ocean,
Reaching out for memories.
^^Beautiful lines....perefct!
Great choice of words
Kp writing!..loved it!
5/5=)
xxPoojaxx

Once again .. you managed to make another really good poem.. you seriously have pure talent for poetry.. I hope you never stop writing them becasue I enjoyed every one of them.. good job once again.. 5/5