Hidden Feelings

by moonlil   Apr 22, 2007


Would you stop searching if I would say "I want you"
Would you stop searching if I would say "I need you"
Would you stop searching if I would say "I love you"
What would you do if i would tell you all this?
Would you say back that you want me
Would you say back that you need me
Would you say back that you love me
What would you do if I would open myself to you and show what I feel?
What would you do if I would give you my heart and soul?
What would you do if I would share everything with you?
Would you open yourself to me too?
Would you take care of my heart and soul and give me yours too?
Would you share everything with me too?
Tell me you want me and I will say me too
Tell me you need me and I will say me too
Tell me you love me and I will say me too
Open yourself to me
Show me what you feel
Give me your love and I will give you mine

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent write and the end said all
    Open yourself to me
    Show me what you feel
    Give me your love and I will give you mine
    great job, love this one , lot of feeling,,, 5/5
    your friend Tracy

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I agree with sweet Cindy.
    This piece is so full of love and warmth
    5/5
    *gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Katrine

    I really enjoyed this. It is truly what secret love feels like. The anxiousness and I really liked how everything was a question, because love is such an unsure thing. Beautiful poem. Keep it up.

    Katrine

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Your poem is full of love. Keep writing.
    Take Care Cindy

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