Now that is the right way to say it. It is fair enough to say that I loved this poem, and your choice of words. Well pinned, great flow, strong emtion. You rock 5/5

Oh,oh,oh! I loved this poem. :]
I think that if you used periods ONLY. No commas or question marks, it would be better. Periods can make lines more precise, like it gives it that KAPOW! you know. And, this poem had that already, but I think periods would help a lot.

You did a great job, I absolutely LOVED this poem.
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5/5

I didn't like this poem as much, because at the beginning it seemed a little shallow. But, I definately felt your anger, and the flow was amazingly done. Another, great piece of poetry.

Sole. x

Wow, what anger lol, i feel like this alot of the time with my bf but its only of the moment so its nohing serious i think this is well written it DEFINATLEY shows your anger lol

xxx alex xxx

HEY GREAT POEM

Lots and lots of anger lol. Loved the ending haha anyways very very well written, the flow was great and I can sense the anger in it, duh! Anyways great job!! Keep it up! 5/5

I liked this poem because it portrayed alot of angery throughout it. The ending was great and really flowed nicely. Well done on an amazingly penned explict poem~mel

Woah, pretty strong. Excellent!

Another great poem. It has a good flow to it and great word choice. I liked it. Another 5/5

Wow..i love this poem...absolutely loved it... i know someone that i dont like that this poem describes lol.... but nice job..it showed a lot of anger throughout this piece...5/5

This is a well penned poem, it holds a lot of strong heart felt emotions. Nice job!

Best wishes,

5/5 Ingrid

Great flow and you can realy sense the anger. I liked it.

Absolutely brutal! How odd I know a yellow-haired witch as well! haha

Wow, this is a crazy poem. I liked it though. I can see you wrote it from hate. It was good. 5/5

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'Blinding yellow hair
Like the flames of hell
Is that your skin burning?
Or your lies--I can't tell'
^^^
Whoa, this first stanza set the tone so well, such a powerful first stanza.

I love the last part, you're still just a b, whoa. I felt the anger, the hurt, I love it :)

This is so awesome.. of course the title captured my eye. You just told it like it is and I love that. The flow is great. You have good writing skills. You know how to convey your message just right. Favorite one so far.