Wow, I noticed your only 13 and you wirte quite good for your age. This poem was really enjoyable to read it kept me interested from start till finish. The 2nd stanza was my favorite although i didnt like how you used "lovely lovely" together i think if you change one word from lovely to something else then it would sound better but thats just my own personal opinion. Well done on this poem it deserves a 5/5 from me~mel