Let my mind fo free

by TeAr dROp   Apr 23, 2007


When I lay on my bed
And let my mind go free
It always seem to be going back
Back to all those unforgotten memories
Like picture flashing before me
So painful...hurting so deep
And slowly my soul creeps into darkness
Feeling so weak trying to reach the peak
For I fell so hard and I'm scare to stand again
All these questions run though my mind

As I lay here tonight
Thinking of you and I
What's most important turn into hate
The love between us fades
And my heart is broken that cant be fixed
Let that sweet kiss be something we miss
The warm hugs and the smile on your face...be erased
Cause I'm letting go of this painful love
I still don't know what went wrong
Loving you made me so strong
I'm so broken that I'm scare to love again
Your soft touch runs though my soul

When I lay on my bed
And let my mind go free

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  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem, I can some what relate to it. Keep up the great work:) There is one change that you could make. In the fithe sentence of the second stanza I think fixes should be fixed. Only a sajestion. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Very sad, but other tahn some typos, it was perfect. You did a good job, keep up the good work. 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Miu

    At first it was lil bit confusing but got more n more clear in the end. Very good poem. And had sad emotions to it... Keep up the good work! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Dave

    Great writeing here only mistake i think i found was in the first line u have bad and thinking it should have been bed other then that was great i really like the line
    "Let that sweet kiss be something we miss
    The warm hugs and the smile on your face...be erase"
    very nice work keep it up

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