The adjectives makes this work soooooooooooooooooooooo good :D should be on an advertisment lol

please comment on 'The bodys' rain' thanx xxx alex xxx

I liked this alot, Again a beautiful meaning which made me smile whilst reading it. I'm sure it would make many other peoples day if they also read it. A simple piece which held so much happiness within it. What more can I possibly say? your word choice basic yet so effective. The structure different, Though I liked it very much. Short and sweet with a good point being made. 5/5 ~Mel