What I Want

by Hunter   Apr 23, 2007


Even though I see you everyday
When I see you, I swallow my tongue and there's nothing I can say
I'm not romantic; all I can do is write
I'm always wrong, and your're always right
You even me out, make me happy when I'm not
You're all I've really got
If I looked inside your soul I would see no creed
And while I'm looking I would also see no greed
Id rather spend my life with you
And do what ever you want me to
Id, do anything, play truth or dare,
Anything, for your love and care
I'd go with you through life"s ups and downs
Life's smiles and life's frowns
To make you happy, I will forever
To disappoint you, I will never
I just want
Someone who for me will do the same

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  • 17 years ago

    by Funkymunz

    See, everyone loves them just like i do! your poems do NOT suck at all and i would know i mean its me!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    Hunter,
    this is so cute!! in a serious way...
    i like how all you're rhymes didn't seem forced at all, and it flows really well.
    great job on this!

    ~Sandra

  • 17 years ago

    by Neta

    I like your poem alot.....
    you do speak the truth....
    good work 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jezzika

    I like it!... The flow was nice... quite good! But at the end it feels a little rocky!!! All in all good Job and a great poem!

    Much love and the best of wishes!
    God Bless!

    @!Jessica!@

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