Thanks for all the comments!

this poem is really good for your first one!
I hope to see more from you soon!

Oh and also, I can relate to this poem!

Alright, you gave me honest feedback on some of my poems, so now I will give you honest feedback. =)

I didn't really like this. It was overloaded with cliches. Everyone hates and loves a person at the same time, and to make this a better poem you could have expanded on your ideas more using more complex vocabulary and a better flow. It was alright, but nothing too special.

Well .. this is a good poem for ur first mine is like that you should look at it and be honest please... but ur poem is good... ;)

Hey, thanks for the comment
I think that for your first poem it is pretty good even with the cliches and the more of them you write the better you should get.
P.S. my first poem is night creatures, lol, and they've gotten better since

I loved this poem. I think I can partly relate right now and I loved the flow. Really well written, and a great start to, what looks to be, an awesome poetry collection!

Take Care - Sole.

This is good but I would have liked it even more if you had developed it a bit more... use stronger words and rhymes, makes us see more ... If you want to make a love poem that has a huuge impact on the readers you must write just a litle bit more complex..

It is good for your first poem and listen what I say is not GODS truth or anything... Its only an opinion and you should write the way that makes you feel good regardless of what others think
After all we write for ourselves ..

So keep writing the way your heart tells you too =)

Take Care =)

For your first poem, you did an exceptionally well job. Keep writting and you will do even better. I can see your potential. I think you have waht tit akes to make it. 4/5

Urmm.... its kinda good but fairly simple and quite what youd expect.

Sometimes I love you
Other times I hate you
Either way,
I still want to be with you.

right urm let me think....

Sometimes, i feel like i really love you.
But hate also is there in my heart,
Whether i hate or love you,
I never want to be apart.

how about something like that

just an idea hun

xxx alex xxx

Good job.. i really like it.. keep writing.. i wrote my frist poem a few weeks ago..

Wow! this is a really good poem for being your first! you should totally continue writing...try working some rhyming into your work...it always seems to make a poem better...um...if you need any help on writing or whatever don't hesitate to message me...i love to help. thank you so much for the comment on my poem.

Good job with the poem 5/5* n if you dont mind could u read sum of mines n tell me wat chu think

That was very nice and so true sometimes

I love diz poem nice writting keep it up :}