Comments : Bloody Knife

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I've read a few of yours poems before and first off i want to say that your poems seem to get better and better with every poem you write. I liked this it was dark and mysterious but the thing i found most interesting was the ryhme scheme being aaaa its very diffficult to pull that scheme off and you did it very well. Good job ~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Oh this was PERFECTTTTTTTT! extremely, absolutely, exactly PERFECT. coz it made me feel so sad and it means it touch my heart.. very nice feelings to read this kind of poet thanks for sharing

  • 16 years ago

    by Seronum

    Excellent poem! i have just been enspired. 5/5! keep up the good work! very touching poem

  • Wow.. very powerful piece. The rhyme was dead on, as well as the flow. I enjoyed it all. Kept me interested the entire time. Great work. Keep it up, =) 5/5 of course.
    -Ally

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    "a trail of tears lead to my soul
    a stolen heart was the highest toll
    giving my total self all and whole
    yet knowing I was never in control "
    ^ I absolutely loved that stanza, along with the last. The rest of the poem was good, but those two stanzas, boy oh boy. loved them. :D

    You did a great job.
    keep it up!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Utterly spechless, this has left me. It was an amazing write. I could feel the emtion pouring out of this before I even got past the first stanza. You are talented. Keep writting, and I will keep reading 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by TeAr dROp

    Wow...this poem is very good keep up the good work!