Aww. thats so sweet.
Short but meaningful
And beautiful
Luv it!

Ohh that was so short but sweet and beautiful... a simple thougths and great imagery!5/5

Aw, this is such a cute poem. I like that it's sweet and short. This showed a lot of emotion, even if it is this small. It's very well written, with the rhyming (something I can't really do myself) =] and the flow was just perfect. Great job! 5/5

.:CiNdY:.

Awww! That was so sweet; I really liked it. Did that poem come from a life experience?

Nice!! keep up the great writing your meant to!! :):)

This poem is a really sweet one... short unlike the other one...=)
the repetition makes it rhythmically really nice...
i just wonder... when you say "upon a penny on the ground", do you mean it literally? Or is it a metaphor for "luck" or "fate"... (just plain curiosity...)
This is really a nice poem =)
5/5
*keep up*
isabel

This poem is so cute. I loved it. Great job, there is also a lot of emotion in this poem as well. You're a great poet. Keep it up 5/5

The simplicity and briefness of this poem give it a delightful Hallmark card flavor
Best wishes to you 5/5

I'm sorry to have to (probably) repeat this cliche:

Short and sweet. I liked it.

Really good little poem, could possibly change the second line to better the rhythm but very very cute :)

Peace. Sole x

I found this piem short and sweet, i am very happy i randomly picked yuour account to read because this poem has made my day. xxxx

Aww so cutee
the repeat really worked for this one]
it was adorable
I totally fell in love
5/5

It is a good poem and it is very sweet. But there is one thing that I think should be changed, every sentence does not need to start with "I wish" it is just too repetitive. However this poem is still a 5/5