I love the poem .. but is it just me .. or are there seven syllables in the first line of the second stanza ...

Good verse. Why explaining all these mathematics. Suppose you write as a result of inner inspiration and not a math book.
Anyway good poem though.

I love this, its very well written. and congragulations. =] 5/5

It's kool. THe words fit perfectly into place and flowed great.

~DV~

Wow nice poem. first time i hear of a minute poetry but sounds good. i liked the poem=)

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Great poem! well...all of ur poems r great but yeah! lol have a great day! buh~bye
Jay J

One of the best ever

Your poems are great as always..keep it up

Good poem... wat strike me was ur choice of words... good one..

Very beautiful...

I could see so many colors all shimmering and sparkling and dazling ..in the poem...

great imagery...
excellent description...

I would love for you to read your poem on my radio show by phone. If interested email me, thanks !

Love it gem an absolute diamond great poetry and construction ann i learned something new today about poetery.