"Feel my heart crying for a smile,
Smile to tell me this isn't the end."

I absolutely loved this poem! wow...My favourite part amidst this great work is the last two lines. It's funny how such a simple gesture, like a smile, can give away such a powerful and amazing feeling like love. Great work, really...you are a great writer! Keep it up.

"Depression, is this what I feel?
Feel my heart crying for a smile,
Smile to tell me this isn't the end. "

Those last three lines left me speechless..
Crying for a smile.. a beautiful line.
A real tear jerker.
5/5
*Gem*

(I've never heard of that song by reliant.. k?, lol. It was a title contest)