Comments : In Your Tears

  • 12 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow that was depressing, descriptive and absolutely wonderful great poem 5/5 i hope you read one of mine.

  • 12 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    Heartbreaking and emotional....excellent as always.... i love that single lined refrain you have in there

  • 12 years ago

    by Boy

    Its sad.... take care

  • 12 years ago

    by TillyMariex

    Very emotional. I luv it :)

  • 12 years ago

    by beautiful xx disaster

    Aw. its really sad... but amazing in that sense. haha : ) i dont know if its possible for something to be sad but amazing but if it is you obviously have done it
    great job
    <3 jess
    p.s. id love if you could check out some of my poems as well id really appreciate your opinion on them

  • 12 years ago

    by Boy

    You are the love that burns to ashes
    buried in your tears that bleed so blue
    aaahhhhh. very nicely done . great writing style
    man your writing force me to give you 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by danielle

    Hey it was sad but good