Wow the transition and the use of spider and descrpition were amazing, loved your poem 5/5 hope you read one of mine.

Wow...what a breath taking poem! I loved it! Your an amazing writer! keep it up can't wait for a ne wpoem

What a wonderful poem. i really like how you used to spider. Keep up the good work.. Keep writting!

Wow lol this is like a conotation of us we are so feeble :d

xxx alex xxx

Already done htis one lol :D

Wow, great poem, it is very emotional and touching. You created great atmosphere and rhythm of this piece is simply incredible. Well done!